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Автор отзывов: Чубиков Александр

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Дата: 2014-12-27 21:30:28

Отзыв к стихотворению: Медведь (всё так и было)

Автор стихотворения: Светлова Елена

Author: Elena Svetlov
Publication date: 15.12.2014
Section: poems about animals
Bear (all it was)

Summer came out of the woods
And sat down by the roadside bear.
Whether the machine is not heard,
Whether people see.
Dybilas hair on the back of the head,
Here he sits among the day.
Rocks in the face grin:
What frightened me?
Riding machine with caution,
It would not have happened then.
That roam the sidelines?
Gudkov not spugnёsh it.
Got up, dusted himself off, yawning,
In the forest deepened, disappeared
We look at the lame leg.
Doctors can be seen looking for

Дата: 2014-12-27 20:48:39

Отзыв к стихотворению: Кто я?

Автор стихотворения: Светлова Елена

Author: Elena Svetlov
Publication date: 12.26.2014
Section: philosophical poems
Who I am?

Becoming spring, go to the outfit,
In the dress of the flower of love.
Fun and at the parade,
Next they hiss nightingales.
Summer I. With hot heat,
Dandelions in hand.
I'm going to dawn field
Blue ribbon in the queue.
Autumn. Gloomy sky groans.
This is me - cold light.
Wind yellow leaf drives,
I pay him followed suit.
Snow and rain, blood freezes.
This I came, winter.
In the blizzard sataneet,
Swept out of the house.
Full circle, all over again.
Start everything from scratch.
And angry and shouted,
And laughed, and said nothing ...
Think about it, who am I.

Дата: 2014-12-27 20:45:37

Отзыв к стихотворению: Мне наверно смеяться пора

Автор стихотворения: Светлова Елена

Author: Elena Svetlov
Publication date: 12.26.2014
Section: philosophical poems
I probably time to laugh

I probably time to laugh.
Reflected in the window blind,
I sit speechless until the morning,
A ringed soul crying.
Somewhere far, far away,
In voiced rosah sun bathing,
The path is run easily
Bell song is heard.
Somewhere along the river running wave,
And lives quite there otherwise.
For someone there the birds are singing.
Here the soul ringed crying.

Дата: 2014-12-27 20:41:03

Отзыв к стихотворению: Ты однажды тихонько уйдёшь

Автор стихотворения: Светлова Елена

Author: Elena Svetlov
Publication date: 12.26.2014
Section: love poems
You once quietly go away

You once quietly go away,
I'll hope for a miracle.
After all, the sun gives way to rain,
And the river breaks through a dam.
Out of my soul droplets evil
Not eager to avenge the insult.
And love for you is gone after.
Crying heart. I will not give it.

Дата: 2014-12-27 20:37:47

Отзыв к стихотворению: Я в Мир вхожу

Автор стихотворения: Светлова Елена

Author: Elena Svetlov
Publication date: 12.26.2014
Section: philosophical poems
I enter the World

I enter the World, in its vastness.
It can be colored and gray.
At the entrance stands guard who
I paint per color white.
And if flamed passionately,
I guard the soul cools.
He commanded me imperiously:
I second preserves.
I second saves me.
And if I rush to the gates of Hell,
My shyvorot missing
And I hisses: "There inappropriately"!

Дата: 2014-12-27 20:33:24

Отзыв к стихотворению: В стихАх.

Автор стихотворения: Токарева Ирина

Дата: 2014-12-27 20:29:12

Отзыв к стихотворению: Мне обжог поцелуем лицо

Автор стихотворения: Светлова Елена

Author: Elena Svetlov
Publication date: 12.26.2014
Section: love poems
I kiss face obzhog

I obzhog kiss face,
Opal burning flames of hell.
Chained my heart in the ring,
Of thorns ponastavil obstacles.
And went on the trail of dawn,
Pain and wounds on the memory left,
Lost, disappearing into the crowd,
Why so cunning words?
Judas Kiss obzhog,
Burned bridges, leaving, behind him.
Here I stand. Before me a hundred roads.
Where is the one with true love?
Where is the road that leads to the sea,
To ship to sail was red?
I know, in the heart of a dream come to life,
I'm going, I'm still not tired.

Дата: 2014-12-27 20:23:50

Отзыв к стихотворению: Закурлыкали над лесом журавли

Автор стихотворения: Светлова Елена

Author: Elena Svetlov
Publication date: 12.26.2014
Section: philosophical poems
Zakurlykali over the forest cranes

Zakurlykali over the forest cranes
And for a wedge of cranes running road.
The steam rose from the darkening of the earth,
And trembles Osinka-touchy.
I would fly with cranes in blue,
To enjoy the wind in the sky.
To feel in flight that I live,
Beating heart with joy in the middle.
Far beyond the horizon of cranes,
White snow swept road.
I could not get off the ground
As on a leash at its doorstep

Дата: 2014-12-27 20:13:32

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